Tuesday, 15 November 2011

Australian Pink Floyd double page spread analysis - Hollie



The writer of the article uses an informal and relaxed style to connect with the reader, such as 'back room in your local spring to mind'. Use of 'we're' and 'you' speaks to the reader, making it more friendly and easier to read in some sense. Statements and statistics of the band make the article more believable, as well as the use of quotations. For example, 'we do everything more or less too a tee'.
Simple and compound sentences make the article easier to read and appeals to a younger audience because of the simple style. Also, the writer doesn't use a very wide range of vocabulary in the text, with 'phenomenon' being as complicated as it gets, making it suitable for the young readers.
Passive sentences are used in the article so the text does not go on and seem boring.

1 comment:

  1. We know that we need to do more on the work, but need assistance as what to write.

    ReplyDelete